tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3905626483224395952.post445054691242367144..comments2010-10-13T16:47:24.775-07:00Comments on CW 602 SFSU: Megan T, 9/16/10, "The Party"CW 602http://www.blogger.com/profile/18192064076800738953noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3905626483224395952.post-3060438857018537832010-09-19T18:52:09.943-07:002010-09-19T18:52:09.943-07:00Notes from Roy:
This is a good scene, with comedy,...Notes from Roy:<br />This is a good scene, with comedy, and a rising sense of action, as the gulf between Sarah and the others becomes more obvious throughout. Though it's difficult to quite figure at first, I was able to discern the patterns among the characters more easily while reading through a second time. A few more stage directions denoting who's talking to whom might be helpful. Also I wonder who's grouping with whom.<br /><br />I was somewhat confused by the "Never Have I Ever" game. I get that one makes a declaration, but not what follows. If there's a way to give a quick explanation to someone, like Sarah, that might be helpful.<br /><br />There are good moments of tension when Sarah realizes that she is a "normal" to them, and when they start to break out of their imposed silence. Like Sarah, I wonder what's going to happen at this party, and her decision to leave is a good climax to the scene.<br /><br />Further dramatic opportunities might come from questions that the scene leaves, like how did Sarah find herself with these people? Who and where is David? How will Sarah interact with individuals from the party if she meets them later? What kind of events might take place at this party?El profesorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18312748035324238013noreply@blogger.com