tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3905626483224395952.post3656634803546824354..comments2010-10-13T16:47:24.775-07:00Comments on CW 602 SFSU: Beth Bauler - 10/6/10 - Just AskCW 602http://www.blogger.com/profile/18192064076800738953noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3905626483224395952.post-26567863078464404152010-10-13T16:47:24.775-07:002010-10-13T16:47:24.775-07:00Notes from Roy:
There's lots of great interact...Notes from Roy:<br />There's lots of great interaction in this scene, and the childlike way these two deal with each other has a strong sense of authenticity. There's also a good sense of rising action in the scene - a dramatic sensibility that pulls us forward and increases the stakes throughout.<br /><br />One other thing is that this scene really raises the level of danger in your piece. Now we see that Sally is not only threatened by her health issues, but even more so by the voice of this friend inside of her. And the stakes are very high because it's a matter of life and death. And there's even more danger because the issues are being approached in a childlike way where death is seen as "going away," as if it were only a game.<br /><br />RoyEl profesorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18312748035324238013noreply@blogger.com